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           I feel that I did well on my Writing Project considering how I have never really had to write about a topic like this before. It wasn't too challenging because of the project builders. I think some of the strengths of my paper were the quotes that I included and I feel that I was able to make clear what my main objective was. I feel that I could have worked more on my analysis of the genres and what else was different about them and how their differences further contributed to my thesis. in terms of my writing, I think I could use more help on how to write a proper conclusion paragraph. Out of all of my paragraphs, I think that one was the weakest. Something in class that could possibly be focused on is how to write a proper introduction and conlusion paragraph. Also maybe an example of a thesis statement that a past student has written before.

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