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Detective DKT/Eulogy
 The victim's name is Janet Doesky, the body was found on the beach by Cat Lewis whose dog was chewing on the victim's shoe when she discovered the body. The cause of death appears to be a gunshot to the head (did not look self-inflicted but could possibly be). The time of death was July 4; 2017 at 8:01p.m.. There was no witness to the crime and but a man named Mac who lives directly above the beach said that he heard  2 gunshots around 7:55p.m-8:05p.m. He then also stated that he saw a couple run-pass his house about 10 minutes after hearing the gunshots. So far the couple that Mac saw are the only suspects.
I start by stating the victim's name and ending with who the possible suspects are. I found myself only wanting to add standard details about the case that I have heard on crime shown and the news. I chose basic words that weren't complicated to understand. I tried to not really have a tone and just list things. I ordered my information from the basic details to the more "interesting" ones. 

To my sister Janet. The worst thing imaginable has happened. You will be remembered by me as my amazing little sister who I will miss dearly. By your friends, you will be remembered as the life of the party and by your coworkers as a great boss who was a strong advocate for the environment. You will never be forgotten. 

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