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Journal 4: Responding to Other students writing
The role of a peer reviewer is to give advice to the writer what maybe they can add on to or possibly take out. You should see yourself as the reader and not the writer. You should not try to make the perper your own because it is the writers. So do not be over critical but also not too kind either. What you should do is try to give an equal amount of criticism and positive reviews. The type of comments that you should make are marginal notes and a note letter at the end. Your tone should be of that of a supportive friend who wants you to succeed. Out of this peer review, I would like to get some feedback on maybe how to structure my sentences better. I am feeling somewhat ok about this draft but I definitely think it could be proved upon considering that I don't really have a thesis, I feel that my strengths in the draft are my information I have on each genre.

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